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Wolf Creek Alpha Texas Pack 1

Can a witch accept that she's the mate to an alpha werewolf Rafe loves her deeply now he has to convince herVisiting her friend in the small east Texas town of Wolf Creek Lisa is shocked when she learns that shifters are real and even shocked when a light Fae warrior informs her she's a witch Bu. Wellthis was honestly very hard to readI m a huge fan of paranormal fantasy romance stories so put it all together I was excited to pick up this bookPros Strong male lead Flawed female lead in a good way she had some snarky moments I appreciated but she wasn t afraid to admit that she could be a chicken Attractive supporting crew Interesting story conceptConsOkay stretches out fingers here comes the landmineThis story was writtenhow do I say this nicelyvery simplistically Once I finished reading it I was shocked to see this author has published as many stories as she has I can only hope for her readers that her writing has improvedThe writing was so bad that at one point I figured I must already have been halfway through the storyI was only 27 pages inNow what I mean by poor writing is that this author didn t understand embrace the concept of Show don t tellLet me give you an exampleJo Ellen s writing Lisa was worried about RafeHow it should have been written Lisa fidgeted in her seat her thoughts continuously flitting back to Rafe Was he okay Why wasn t he back yet She wasn t sure how much longer she could handle the impatience of not knowingJo Ellen constantly just stated how the characters felt but I wanted to feel what they felt Was their heart pounding in their chest Did they have to fight the urge to get up and pace Okay so this person was annoyed but did it make them just wrinkle their nose or want to punch somethingThen there was the continuous switching of perspectives as well as the flip flopping back and forth of third person to first person narrativeI enjoy reading from different characters perspective but when the perspective changes from paragraph to paragraph with no clear transition it can be very disorientating and extremely frustrating as I constantly had to go back and re read a section just to figure out whose perspective the story was being told fromThen there s the whole issue of switching between third and first person narration True the author only use first person when trying to show a character s thoughts but there was no use of uotation marks to signify the beginning and end of a thought so once again I was disorientated wondering what was the character s thought and the story narration And this happened a lot I won t even go in depth about the dialogue but I will say there were only a handful of moments where the words didn t seem forcedI will cut some slack for the inconsistent characters just because I feel the author was trying to show the character responding to the whirlwind of eventsOverall this story concept would have been utterly amazing if it had just been written with a bit finesse So read at your own risk

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T this is just the beginning of her journey Werewolves shifters light and dark Fae creatures Who knew She'd always been a little intuitive a little bit different But wasn't everyone Rafe is the alpha of the east Texas pack and according to him her mate Keeping his new mate safe from an evil Fae. 25 starsdisappointed in this one as a paid for book off my wish list the blur sounded good its been sitting on the list for a while so after my birthday I bought itLisa on a visit to her friend finds out about shifters and magic and that SHE has magic She is part Fae Rafe is the Alpha of the pack that guards the magic pond Someone wants the pond or rather they are after Lisa in a round about way Rafe and Lisa turn out to be mates and Lisa is fighting it all the way as well as whats happening with the magicThe writing is jumpy it doesn t flow so well and some dialogue is very stilted There were points were I had to reread previous paragraphs cos I thought I had missed something explained but it It was just chucked in Often in the same scene things are repeated a couple of times and it got a little boring The ending jumps on you right at the last minute which is not always a BAD thing but it just felt like this author ran out of steam and rushed to get it into XXX number of wordspagesThere are others in this serious but I don t think I will get them or add them to my list unless they become freesorry but not for me The Freeze-Frame Revolution paid for book off my wish list the blur sounded good its been sitting on the list for a while so after my birthday I bought itLisa on a visit to her friend finds out about shifters and magic and that SHE has magic She is The New-York Review, and Atheneum Magazine, Vol. 2 part Fae Rafe is the Alpha of the Mon patron voulait que je tape les seins nus pack that guards the magic His Christmas Cowgirl (Wildflower Ranch pond Someone wants the The Doctors Dating Bargain pond or rather they are after Lisa in a round about way Rafe and Lisa turn out to be mates and Lisa is fighting it all the way as well as whats happening with the magicThe writing is jumpy it doesn t flow so well and some dialogue is very stilted There were The Collection points were I had to reread Whispers of Feathers previous Mount série tome 3 - L'empire du mal paragraphs cos I thought I had missed something explained but it It was just chucked in Often in the same scene things are repeated a couple of times and it got a little boring The ending jumps on you right at the last minute which is not always a BAD thing but it just felt like this author ran out of steam and rushed to get it into XXX number of wordspagesThere are others in this serious but I don t think I will get them or add them to my list unless they become freesorry but not for me

Jo Ellen â 9 Free read

Will take the strength of his pack and the help of their magical friends The ueen of Faery gave all shifters the ability to change their mates in the enchanted water Lisa will have to decide if she wants to enter the water with Rafe and make the change to be come a werewolf and be his mate forev. Nice idea butWorst written story I ve read to date I like the script I will even say I liked the charactersThat being said that is ALL I liked The author s use of had in every other sentence switching between first and third person and basically writing as if talking ruined this one for me For a tale of an alpha and his pack it lacks any real challenge building to a climax let alone any detailed fighting or shifting The only thing I can say about the Texas Pack is how domestic they are they cook they clean they eat The best written character is Robert a fae Rafe lacks depth and identity Lisa comes across confused and flighty and all the other characters are just too good to be true polite understanding non confrontational Even the villain is spared Too much sap to try to digest On my Were Scale of Hotness0 stars


10 thoughts on “Wolf Creek Alpha Texas Pack 1

  1. says:

    Wellthis was honestly very hard to readI'm a huge fan of paranormal fantasy romance stories so put it all together I was excited to pick up this bookPros Strong male lead Flawed female lead in a good way she had some snarky moments I appreciated but she wasn't afraid to admit that she could be a chicken Attractive supporting crew

  2. says:

    It's okThis book wasn't uite what I expected the synopsis sounded interesting although I'm not generally a fan of the fae I still decided to give it a try and while the idea in itself was ok the writing let it down I suspect that this is the author's first book and I don't want to be too critical but I would suggest that before she adds any dialects to her books she does some research first because it was appalling an

  3. says:

    I really wanted to love this book but there was just too much going on to follow I like a complex read but this wa

  4. says:

    25 starsdisappointed in this one as a paid for book off my wish list the blur sounded good its been sitting on the list for a while so after my birthday I bought itLisa on a visit to her friend finds out about shifters and magic and that SHE h

  5. says:

    Another great free book While the writing style was a little rough a couple of instances where the story telling of two different perspectives for the same time was a little weird the story was really good and will be looking into from this author

  6. says:

    This was a free kindle book and a pleasant surprise The authors style was a bit rough and even though the story didn't flow it was a great read

  7. says:

    This book s the first book I’ve read by this author and I enjoyed it overall Sometimes it felt like the story moved a little too uickly between characters but it didn’t stop me from enjoying the book I’m looking forward to the next book in the series and watching the rest of the pack find their mates

  8. says:

    For the sake of charity I am going to assume this author published a first draft and dispensed with the cost of a professional editor It's a great pity that people evidently bored stiff when their teachers attempted to teach grammar decide as

  9. says:

    Nice idea butWorst written story I've read to date I like the script I will even say I liked the charactersThat being said that is ALL I liked The author's use of had in every other sentence switching between first and third person and basically writing as if talking ruined this one for me For a tale of an alpha and his pack it lacks any real challenge building to a climax let alone any detailed fighting or shifting The only thing I can say

  10. says:

    When Lisa arrives to visit her best friend never in her wildest dream would she imagine that she would find out she is the mate to sexy alpha shifter Rafe Rafe knows Lisa is human and would ordinarily take a bit of time to romance her but with a prophecy announcing a dark fae attack coming he has to speed thin

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