[Reading Holding Back] Ebook ✓ Mila Kerr

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Holding Back

Er imagined she could trust anyone let alone fall in love Especially with someone like Lex someone completely not her type She was innocent pure a girl next door type of womanand straightEvery. Wow This book is amazing I ve read books from Alta Hensley before so was extremely excited to hear she released this book under a different name I was curious to see how she would do changing up her writing genre a bit and was not disappointed She writes hot books and having two female characters in this book didn t change that at all

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Thing begins to come into uestion Love Sexuality Trust Can Lex let go and embrace her new feelings Can Dani allow herself to trust in someone she just met Can they both finally stop holding ba. Some gems of prose from the book so farShe thought she was doing so good keeping her emotions hidden Well until you leave I d like to still explore this connection we have That kiss only confirmed my feelings that you and I may have something Lex stared at her speechless Dani smiled Let s not think of the future and you leaving any Let s focus on right now She allowed the feelings of passion desire and need to rock her body She didn t fight the emotions with any doubt or confusion She allowed the kiss to be just that An amazing affectionate and life altering kissA small amount of pain attacked her heart just thinking about itYou re in unchartered territoryThey were having small talkLex spread her fingers over the silky smoothness of Dani s cheek moving them down to the plumpness of her natural lipsProbably the worst book I have ever read

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For Lex the plan was to earn some money so she could make a fresh start She had no idea that everything was about to change the minute the famous Dani Levley walked in the door Dani Levley nev. It disappoints me to say that I expected from Mila Kerr s Holding Back and it never delivered For the record I will say it s easy to determine what the problem isthere really wasn t much of a story to be had in Holding Back and the scenarios were so obviously contrived that I was neither convinced by the measures presented nor was I convinced of the relationship within the work I applaud the author in that this was her first F F story and I applaud her also for actually attempting to write a New Adult story with GLBT characters but it left so much to be desired especially considering I ve read so many stories of this kind that took the ball and ran with it in much better ways I m usually a person who loves reading stories that are character driven and allow me to see inside the lives of the characters and view their struggles I read multicultural stories I read GLBT stories I like reading books that showcase characters from a number of different backgrounds What irked me about Holding Back was not only the fact that the characters were mentioned as either straight or lesbian every so often to the point it was overkill their struggles within their sexual identification and relationships were told than shown and they were having sex every other page with very little else defining the characters themselves and their relationships I ll admit in the beginning there s some initial set up to showing who Dani and Lex were Dani s a famous person though this is never defined the book cites Dani as being famous just because she s a lesbian I had trouble with this while Lex is a waitress at a lesbian club The two meet hit it off even considering the measures that Lex is actually a straight woman Lex keeps emphasizing the fact that she s never been with a woman and this is repeated over and over and over I kept thinking I understood that the first time you needn t repeat that factor it d be better to use that space to actually develop who Lex is in terms of her relationships and background I d also like to see that with Dani because there s not much given to make either one of them stand out or memorable Unfortunately the characters aren t delved into there s no deep POV or any expansion on the issue of them dealing with their sexuality issues and relationship beyond surface development They instalove and have multiple measures of sexual encounters that feel repetitive for such a short text Not to mention the fact that the conflicts that they encounter are incredibly contrived what with the discrepancy of a friend having a female name Shay but actually being male and jealousy games that really didn t have a strong backing to begin with I read through to the end but I kept thinking This could ve been so much than what it was It was a uick read but I didn t care for it unfortunately I think it needed so much development and actual stakes in the story to make it compelling The characters felt too threadbare and the encounters and conflicts were far too shallow for me to connect to anything in the story Overall score 15 stars Note I received this as an ARC from NetGalley from the publisher


5 thoughts on “Holding Back

  1. says:

    It disappoints me to say that I expected from Mila Kerr's Holding Back  and it never delivered For the record I will say it's easy to determine what the problem isthere really wasn't much of a story to be had in Holding Back and the scenarios were so obviously contrived that I was neither convinced by the measures presented nor was I convinced of the relationship within the work  I applaud the author in that this was her first

  2. says:

    Wow This book is amazing I've read books from Alta Hensley before so was extremely excited to hear she released

  3. says:

    Some gems of prose from the book so farShe thought she was doing so good keeping her emotions hidden“Well until

  4. says:

    I always like a story that involves misunderstandings they show us that we are all human Lex and Dani prove to be suffering from this human condition as their relationship teeters on the precipice and is tested before it is cemented like they

  5. says:

    Lex moved from Las Vegas to San Francisco to get a fresh start She misses her friends and family back home She's working as a bartend

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