[trains Books] TXT Wolf Creek Alpha Texas Pack 1 ✓ Jo Ellen

Jo Ellen Õ 5 review

Will take the strength of his pack and the help of their magical friends The ueen of Faery gave all shifters the ability to change their mates in the enchanted water Lisa will have to decide if she wants to enter the water with Rafe and make the change to be come a werewolf and be his mate forev. For the sake of charity I am going to assume this author published a first draft and dispensed with the cost of a professional editor It s a great pity that people evidently bored stiff when their teachers attempted to teach grammar decide as adults to become writers without taking remedial grammar classes Or at the very least pay for a professional editor who would let the author know in no uncertain terms that no one should ever use the expression as to why and expect people to pay good money for a novelThis book abounds with egregious grammar and syntax errors Is it really too much to expect too instead of to or you re instead of your Or how about this gem of a sentence His father felt that by his not being in the castle the pack would begin to look to Rafe as their leader An editor would have suggested that the sentence be rewritten thus His father believed that his choice to live elsewhere would encourage the pack to accept Rafe as their leader Although why this was necessary is never explained I ll give one example Ian went on to explain that there were records showing that Stephen had bought a gun The same caliber as the one Rafe had been shot with Obviously the second portion I uote is a sentence fragment rather than a complete sentence An editor would have pointed out that a much less awkward and a far readable construction would have been Ian explained he had found evidence that Stephen had purchased a gun of the same caliber used to shoot RafeThe basic premise of the story appealed to me I love a good wolf shifter finds his mate trope Sadly this was not it The book is a tease Will they Won t they Eventually when they do have sex it is bland and one does not feel the wonder of the mating because this writer doesn t know that a good writer shows it and doesn t tell it The Fae SeelieUnseelie good vs evil is always a good story but please spare us the fake accents Has the author met anyone from Scotland who actually speaks in this ridiculous manner It is such a cliche By the way the author consistently spells Fae Seelie and Unseelie with a lower case f s and u which is another mistake an editor would have caughtIt would have been nice had there been some character development None of the people had any distinguishing personality traits They were all the same identical people staggering around with different hair or eye color genders or ages I am very grateful that I spent no money in the purchase of this book although I resent the three hours or so I invested in reading it I ll never get that time back Secret Agent Minister and Deadly Texas Rose you re instead of Dangerous Melody (Treasure Seekers your Or how about this gem of a sentence His father felt that by his not being in the castle the pack would begin to look to Rafe as their leader An editor would have suggested that the sentence be rewritten thus His father believed that his choice to live elsewhere would encourage the pack to accept Rafe as their leader Although why this was necessary is never explained I ll give one example Ian went on to explain that there were records showing that Stephen had bought a gun The same caliber as the one Rafe had been shot with Obviously the second portion I uote is a sentence fragment rather than a complete sentence An editor would have pointed out that a much less awkward and a far readable construction would have been Ian explained he had found evidence that Stephen had purchased a gun of the same caliber used to shoot RafeThe basic premise of the story appealed to me I love a good wolf shifter finds his mate trope Sadly this was not it The book is a tease Will they Won t they Eventually when they do have sex it is bland and one does not feel the wonder of the mating because this writer doesn t know that a good writer shows it and doesn t tell it The Fae SeelieUnseelie good vs evil is always a good story but please spare us the fake accents Has the author met anyone from Scotland who actually speaks in this ridiculous manner It is such a cliche By the way the author consistently spells Fae Seelie and Unseelie with a lower case f s and u which is another mistake an editor would have caughtIt would have been nice had there been some character development None of the people had any distinguishing personality traits They were all the same identical people staggering around with different hair or eye color genders or ages I am very grateful that I spent no money in the purchase of this book although I resent the three hours or so I invested in reading it I ll never get that time back

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Wolf Creek Alpha Texas Pack 1

Can a witch accept that she's the mate to an alpha werewolf Rafe loves her deeply now he has to convince herVisiting her friend in the small east Texas town of Wolf Creek Lisa is shocked when she learns that shifters are real and even shocked when a light Fae warrior informs her she's a witch Bu. It s okThis book wasn t uite what I expected the synopsis sounded interesting although I m not generally a fan of the fae I still decided to give it a try and while the idea in itself was ok the writing let it down I suspect that this is the author s first book and I don t want to be too critical but I would suggest that before she adds any dialects to her books she does some research first because it was appalling and there s really no excuse for thatThe characters and the humour between them was good and the main reason I continued reading although in the end it all felt very anticlimactic

review Wolf Creek Alpha Texas Pack 1

T this is just the beginning of her journey Werewolves shifters light and dark Fae creatures Who knew She'd always been a little intuitive a little bit different But wasn't everyone Rafe is the alpha of the east Texas pack and according to him her mate Keeping his new mate safe from an evil Fae. Another great free book While the writing style was a little rough a couple of instances where the story telling of two different perspectives for the same time was a little weird the story was really good and will be looking into from this author


10 thoughts on “Wolf Creek Alpha Texas Pack 1

  1. says:

    Wellthis was honestly very hard to readI'm a huge fan of paranormal fantasy romance stories so put it all together I was ex

  2. says:

    It's okThis book wasn't uite what I expected the synopsis sounded interesting although I'm not generally a fan of the fae I still decided to give it a try and while the idea in itself was ok the writing let it d

  3. says:

    I really wanted to love this book but there was just too much going on to follow I like a complex read but this was all over the place at times I had to have my full focus on reading to not get lostThe characters were kind of one dimensional I wasn't getting a ton from them I did like Lisa and all her sass I liked her banter with

  4. says:

    25 starsdisappointed in this one as a paid for book off my wish list the blur sounded good its been sitting on the list for a while so after my birthday I bought itLisa on a visit to her friend finds out about shifters and magic and that SHE has magic She is part Fae Rafe is the Alpha of the pack that guards the magic pond Someone wants th

  5. says:

    Another great free book While the writing style was a little rough a couple of instances where the story telling of two different perspectives for the same time was a little weird the story was really good and will be looking into from this author

  6. says:

    This was a free kindle book and a pleasant surprise The authors style was a bit rough and even though the story didn't flow it was a great read

  7. says:

    This book s the first book I’ve read by this author and I enjoyed it overall Sometimes it felt like the story moved a little too uickly between characters but it didn’t stop me from enjoying the book I’m looking forward to the next book in the series and watching the rest of the pack find their mates

  8. says:

    For the sake of charity I am going to assume

  9. says:

    Nice idea butWorst written story I've read to date I like the script I will even say I liked the charactersThat being said that is ALL I liked The author's use of had in every other sentence switching between first and thir

  10. says:

    When Lisa arrives to visit her best friend never in her wildest dream would she imagine that she would find out s

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